Old 15th December 2005, 02:02   #1
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My first (good) avs present

is this a good start?
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Old 15th December 2005, 03:10   #2
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Dammit, man! Why the .rar? Zip is still king, no matter what you kids say.

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Old 15th December 2005, 11:27   #3
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was it a good start or not?

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Old 15th December 2005, 14:14   #4
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Im not touching .rar, no matter how "far superior" it is, zip is still more popular and easier.

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Old 15th December 2005, 14:21   #5
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Old 15th December 2005, 18:09   #6
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If by good you mean you took Tuggummi's "Square Minded" and ripped it off without giving him credit... Then yes it's very good.
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Old 15th December 2005, 19:52   #7
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he sad in his coment that we can use things from his present.Look : All code written by Jukka Keskinarkaus (aka Tuggummi)
Feel free to modify or use parts of this preset to make your own presets, but don't copy the whole preset and claim you did that preset.

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Old 15th December 2005, 20:00   #8
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oh by the way this is a zip file of my first avs present( i took the superscope from Tuggummi sorry but i am not that good to do a superscope as good as probably all of you on this winamp site)
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Old 15th December 2005, 20:52   #9
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pretty cool. but don't steal stuff without mentioning it in comments or the preset name..

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Old 15th December 2005, 21:04   #10
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tnx i hope that tuggummi is not mad at me or something like that. i wanna show u my first good and original avs present
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Old 15th December 2005, 21:08   #11
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Yeah, really, it's ok, but all props go to tuggummi on this one. The Dm isn't all that astounding either...And I'm a SSC type...

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Old 15th December 2005, 21:20   #12
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I know, all thnaks to Tuggummi for his wonderfull superscope.Can u tell me what do u think about Florin-Insinde the cockpit;it's relly my avs that i am proud of.I hope u like it;it's a simple one without any special efeects but i am a begginer right?

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Old 15th December 2005, 22:27   #13
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Okay, sorry if we appear a bit rude and not nice at all, but we get tired sometimes to have to tell things 200 times ..
We're all just really nice guys (okay, most of us )

Okay, i'll stop about the .rar file and the missing credits.. (next time: just add someone's name and original preset name in the misc/comment, it's just 2 seconds of work)

A short constructive review:
First One - Why have such a nice scope if you cover it up with that movement? at least set that movement filter to blend.
This is like installing a Lada engine in a Porsche

Inside the cockpit
generally:
Too fast my eyes!!!
Technically:
The color reduction:
I don't see the effect of it.

The ssc: having n set to 1100 is a bit overdone in my eyes. 400 or 500 should be plenty IMO.
tpi.. $pi is integrated now so you don't need to use acos(-1) anymore.
remove Rot and Point. Rot is constant, so there's no need to set them to 0 each frame, especially if they aren't even used:
calculating x1 and y1 the secondary time like this is useless, especially if you don't include point=point+1; per point.

DM: Rot is defined but not used. better remove it.
x and y are static, so there's no need for a >dynamic< movement. Just use a normal movement with the same settings.
a small detail: multiplying is faster than dividing. use *0.5 instead of /2

Also, you entire preset is inside a ignore/replace effectlist. move everything outside it because effectlists are slow. Creating AVS presets technicalwise is all about efficiency.

My advice: Read the tutorials, because it seems you copypasted half your code here to me.

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Old 15th December 2005, 23:21   #14
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Old 15th December 2005, 23:53   #15
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U dont seem rude at all Warrior of the Light.U just sad ur opinion and i respect that and i will try to read those tutorials i doono why i cant get them.How did u got it i meen like did u got any tutorials or something like that?

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Old 16th December 2005, 00:30   #16
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Go to the main AVS forum, and near the top there is a thread by Pak-9 of all the major AVS tutorials around.

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Old 16th December 2005, 02:46   #17
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Originally posted by fastingaciu
he sad in his coment that we can use things from his present.Look : All code written by Jukka Keskinarkaus (aka Tuggummi)
Feel free to modify or use parts of this preset to make your own presets, but don't copy the whole preset and claim you did that preset.
Yes, that's what i've pretty much always said at the end of the comment of my presets (except certain packs like the AVS PARTY series or strobotonic ones)

But, like the kind hearted trusting fool that i am, i expected that people would not be stupid about such simple thing as "give credit where credit is due" and decided not to yack about it in the comment. But my faith in humanity has been abused time and time again... Maybe PAK-9 is right and people really are idiots and i should include 3 pages of legal notices and license agreements on every one of my 20 packs and 778 avs presets i've made.

This little rant here isn't exactly directed at fastingaciu even though the opportunity is here, im just a little tired and i have sand in my vagina, maybe i should go put my nightly astro glide on...

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Old 16th December 2005, 02:50   #18
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lol sorry though i didant what to ruin ur wonderfull present but i SUCK and i tryed to do some mixs so sorry. it like i am tring now for like 6 months and i didant make one good prsent and i relly whant to make them

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